শনিবার, ২৮ ফেব্রুয়ারী, ২০০৯

Facebook ফেসবুকে আমার লেখা তৃতীয় গল্প

Hi ami rj Jerin abar fire aslam commertial 1ta break nea. Porer gaan er jabar agey r1ta phone receive kori,

Hallo ami Safin, dhanmondi tha k bolchi. Apni kemon achen.

Valo achi vaia. Apni kemon achen?

Ami o valo achi. Apu apnar kasey simple 1ta question kori.

Ji koren.

Achha apu apni 1joner sasti amader sobai k dichhen keno.

Ki bolen vaia ami abar ki korlam.

5bochor agey…………….

Phone lineta katey dilo Jerin. Ac room a ghamche Jerin. nischup. Govir chintay dubey achey Jerin. Jerin er dristi monitor er dik a. monitor a cursor ta visib-invisibil hochhey. kichukhon por Jerin er kheal aslo. Jerin bole sorry phonta katey gelo. Porer gaanta sunen, kichukhhon por abar firey ashchi….

Gaan bajay dea Jerin bathroom a gelo. Aynar samne Jerin.

Jerin vabchey- akhon a nia chinta korle hobena. Emni kichukhhon agey 1ta mistake kore felechi. A nia pore chinta kori.show must go on. Rocky amonti korbe ta amar jana chilo na. Jerin nijer mukhey pani chitalo. Er por Jerin fire galo Rjing korte.

Show sesh. Jerin ghorey firchilo, garir moddhe shay Facebook log in korlo. Jerin pray 5mas por log in korlo. status dekhlo 1ta. “keo ki amar cell a kichu taka pathabe ta na hole ami FB chalate parchi na.”- rupa namer 1ti may amon update koreche. Jerin er mone aslo ak somoy Jerin o amon update dito. Jokhon shay 9-10 a porto. Diner 4thake 5ghonta FB chalato. Mone mone Jerin bolche ki paaglamita na tokhon kortam.

Hotat Jerin er chokh pore tar friend sonkhar upor. Matro 140jon. Ak somoy amon chilo jokhon 4000 er upor friend chilo, amonti mone mone vabche Jerin.

Jerin chokh bondho korlo, vabchey... koto na status shay life a likhechey. Ja mathay asto tai status hoy jeto. R prottekta status ae Jeet comment kortoi. Ami kobita likhi r chobi upload kori Jeet comment thaktoi. R o onek ae korto kintu Jeet er comment guloe beshi valo lagto. R sobsomoy Jeet k online a paoa jeto. Amar mone achey, 1din status diachilam “ami dekhte vootnir moto.” tokhon raater 3ta baje. Porerdin amar exam chilo. Ami Facebook log on korlam mobile dia. 2nd comments ta chilo Jeet er “r a tumi amon 1ta vootni ja k dekhe amar 3eenta word mone asey.” Am osthir hoy gelam. Amr r karo comment dekha holo na. ami Jeet er profile gelam INFO te jay or number khujlam. Pelam na. o privacy control kore rekheche bujlam. Amar R pora holo na.. Jeet er kotha vabte vabte ghumia gechilam. Sae raatei bosey 1ta kobita likhe upload kore dilam. Sokale ghum thake uthei facebook check kore dekhi Jeet comment korlo kobitay. “uff tomar kobita jodi sotti hoto.” Ami liklam amio chai “sotti hok, r opekka korte valo lagche na.” porikhha dite gia onek kichue mone aslo na.... ja porechilam sob e pray vule giachi. Tarporeo 60% marks pelam. pura pothe Jeet er kotha mathay ghurchilo. Porikhha dia 100 taka vorae mobile a. Computer a net chalabo mobile edge connect kore. Online or saathe chat korbo. Er ageo onek bar or saathe evabe chat korechi. Kintoo ajker kotha onnorokom onuvuti amar mone. Aj amar kobita sotto hotey jachhe. Ghorey jeye bikal e boslam net a. dekhlam Jeet online a nai. Paray half hour por Jeet online aslo. Ami likhlam

Ki khobor

Aitto valo-jeet liklo. Onek khon chatin korchi.. aksomoy shey jigesh korlo

Ama k tomar kemon lagey

Tomar chobi dekhe to valoi mone hoy.

Chobir kotha bolchi naa. Ama k tomar kemon lagey??

Toma k dekhichi naki, bolbo kemon korey??

Na mane amar status kobita sobkichu dekhe tomar ki mone hoy.

O achha amar mone hoi tumi misti pagol. Tumi onek sundor to tai sobe valo chokhe dekho.

Na ami sundor na.. amar profile picture er sob chobi gulo editing kora. Ame naturally dekhte chobir moto na.

Mane, bujlam na.

Atto bujhtey hobena. Achha boloto amar kobita ta ki sotti hobey.

Oi kobita gulo tomar moner kotha. Atto pathetic kobita tomar moner kotha??

Ha keno, ki holo

Na mone korchilam ogulo sudhue kobita.

Ahha, chatting korte valo lagche na tomar number ta dao ami kotha bolbo.

Ami to sobai k amar number dae na.

Ama k diba naki na.

Achha wait koro ami kichukhhon por aschi, 1tu busy.

Ae bole Jeet offline a chole gelo.

Monta khrap hoy galo. Chokhe pani chol chol korchey. Ami computer ta direct power off kore dilam. Bujlam ja vabchi sobe besi besi, atota chinta kora thik hoy ni. Akta ghum diachilam. Ghum thake uthei sob thik hoy gechilo. Mobile thake abar Facebook chalai. Jeet er chinta baad dilam. inbox a dekhi new messsage. Check kore dekhi Jeet tar number pathiache. Khushite attohara hoy jai. Jeet k call dae. evabe amader kotha suru holo. Kintu ami ta k pabar kotha r mathai aneni. Akhon e somoy hoyni. Emni kotha boli. Kintoo holo j tritio dinei o amar sathe dekha korte chailo. Amra friend hisabe dekha kori. Prothome raji hote chai ni. tarpore raji holam. 1din dekha holo. Abong saedintai chilo amar a chotto jiboner sob chay dukher din……

Rajiv jore break koshlo. Atey Jerin chom k utlo. Driver bole- “dukhhito hotat kore local garita side change korlo. Ta na hole apnake otiter smritir rajjo theke uthatam na.” Jerin obak holo, r bole “mane bujlam na.”

“na mem maf koren kintu moner kotha to, khub bolte ichha korchey tai bolchi, apna k onek sundor lagchilo. Apni chok bondho kore hotat 1bar haschen abar...."

kichukhon chup korey rajiv bole, “abar kadchilen. Kintu apnak sundor lagchilo. Ami dukhito apna k ae kothagulo bolar jonno.”

Jerin obak hoy garir mirror er di k takia achey. Gari cholche. Rajiv er kotha Jerin er kane jachhe na.

“Mem tissue nen.” Rjiv er duibar bolar por Jerin sunlo kothati. Jerin jigesh korlo “ken tssue nibo ken.” Rajiv bollo “mem kichu ki hoyeche , bujhchen na apnar chokhe jol.” Jerin ebar tar purse thake glass ber kore dekhlo tar chok lal hoy gachey. Jerin vabchey- a ki holo, kichue bujhte parchina. Aynay nijeke chinte parchina. Rajiv aba bole, “mem nirab sir er kache sunlam apnar bia hochhey.” Jerin bole- apnio asen, agami soptahe dorbar hall a raate.”

Jerin basay firey na kheyi 1ta ghum dilo. ghum thake uthe dekhlo pasey Rocky, tar hat dhorey bosey achey. Jerin uthey boslo. Rocky jigesh korlo,

“Ki hoyche. Toma k amon keno dekhachhey. Osustho naki.”

“Na temon kivhu na. achha 1ta kotha bolo to tumi ki ama k valobasho”

“hotat ae prosno keno.”

“na bolo”

“ki mone hoy.”

“na tumi bolo”

“valobasha mukhe bujhia bola jay na. tarpore tumi jehetu mukhe sunte chao tai bollam bashi.”

“kototuku”

“valobasha to porimap kora jay na. tobey onek. Keno jigesh korcho”

“aj radio te….”

“ha ami sunechi.”

“tumi ki keo k bolecho”

“naa keo k bolini. jantam amon 1ta prosno korbe. Tai ami tomar uttor dia jachhi.”

“tahole shay kivabe janlo, manusher to janar kotha na, ae karon facebook a add request option ta disabled rekhechi. Amon ki ami toma keo add kori ni karon tomar bondura ama k pabey, add korte chaibe. Tomar 2000+ friend……”

Rocky bole- “ajonnoe majhe majhe ami toma k boka boli. Oita to JEET o hote pare.”

“tai to. evabe vabini keno??, tar kono porichito keo to hote pare”

“ha setai, jantam tumi bisal shocked hobe tai office sesh hotei tmar kache chole aslam. Kotobar bolichi cellphone ta te kompokhhe vibrationta dia rekho. Dekho koto phone diachi.”

“sorry, amar bokamir jonno toma k chintito thakte holo, tai na.”

“kichukhhon agey jigesh korechile na ami toma k val0bashi kina.”

“khoma koro, r jigesh korbo na.”

“sotti onek valobashi, tomar dukho k amar dukho kore nilam etai to valobasha. R na hole ami jevabee khepe jai, tato jano. akhono kintoo khepe nai. etai to valobasha.”

“humm. Bujhchi r bokami korbona to.”

“na bokami korba. Kichu khon agey je vabe charge korchila... ami kintu moja pachhilam. Tumi ragle valo lage. Suno ami ba tumi keo e perfect na. amar vul gulo sudhrba tumi, ama k perfect korar try korbe.. r ami jototuku pari chesta korbo. A kei bole valobasha.”

“hoyeche ebar ami 1tu valobashi… bolo ki khabe tea na coffee.”

Rocky bollo- “tumi jano tumi keno boka.”

“keno”-haste haste jigesh korlo Jerin.

“Karon tumi onek sundor tai.”

Ebar Jerin er mukh kalo hoy gelo. Rocky jigesh korlo

“ebar ki holo- ami abar ki vul korlam.”

“Vul tumi koroni... aj tomake r 1ta kotha boli, sobsomoy bolte na, sundor bolle amar mon kharap hoto keno. Aj bolbo karonta. Tomake to ami gotokaal boechilam Jeet ama k reject koreche. Keno koreche ta bolini aj boli…”

Rocky bole- “r a jeet to chagol o abar majhe aslo ken, or kotha sunte chai na.”

“na ami bolbo”- Jerin bole.

“achha bolo.”

Jerin bolte suru kore- “ sae somoy ami Facebook a amar sudhu valo valo chobita ditam. Jeet amar chobi dekhe ama k sundori mone korto…”

“ha tumi to sundor”

“please majhe kotha bolo naa. Agey suno. Amader dekha hoy restaurent a. shay ama k dekhe obak hoy. Shay ama k bolechilo oh my god toma k ki vabechilam r tumi ki. Tumi to akdom sundor na. sundor na haow kint2 ur real chobi to ditey paro. Ami to vabechilam toma k amar mon ta dibo kin2 na tumi amar standard er na. dekhecho ami koto sundor. Koi tumi r koi ami. Sorry ami tomar kobitati sotti korte parlam na. aetuku bolleo valo hoto kintu shay r o ja korechilo ta holo.. amader agey thik kora chilo j jar bill payment korbe.. Amar bolatei amara restaurent a dekha kori. Kintu o ama k janalo o amar pichone money loss korte parbe na. ami sundor hole 1ta kotha chilo, tahole naki 1bar na bar bar khoroch korto. Tai amakeo or bill tao ditey hoyeche... ami kichui bolte parlam na.. khub gali ditey ichhey korchilo.. kin2 ae dhoroner manush k kichu bolai britha.. Amar kache taka chilo na, khub koshtey jatayater taka theke manage kore or bill tao dai..kadte kadte basay firlam.

Tarpor pray 1week facebook log kori na. jedin log kori dekhi o friendlist a nai. Ok 1ta kotha bolar chilo. Ta k search dila,m pelam na. mutual friend er list o o nai. Onek khujechilam. Vablam shey mone hoy account deactivate koreche. Sobe savabik hoy giachilo kintooo tar pray 4mas por ka k jani search korte gia ta k pai... se asole deactive korini sudhu nijer naam change korechilo, chobi dekhe ta k chinlam. Tokhon tha k ami r keo k add kortam na friend chara. Tokhon thakei ama k keo add requst pathate pare na.”

“hoyeche, mon voreche. Suno tomar past tomar kache rakho. Present nia vabo. Ami present nia vabi. Amr present tumi. Amar kache valobasha mane amar valo thaka r ami tokhone valo thakbo jokhon tumi valo thakbe. Karon ame mone kore tumi r ami 1jone. Jai hok ami khusi shay amonti korar jonno…”

“mane.”

“mane holo shey amon na korle to ami toma k petam na. r tumi oidin j dukho paychila, sae dukho tumi protidin pete jodi tar r tomar moddhe kichu hoto. Ja hok ready haw amara aj baire khabo. A nia r kokhonoe kichu bolbena………..”


এই পৃথিবীতে অনেক রকমের মানুষ আছেআমরা বুঝি না কে কখন আমাদের মনের অজান্তেই দু:খ দিয়ে দেয়আমরা সহজ ভাবেই মানুষকে আপন করে ফেলিভালবাসায়ও যাচাই করতে হয়আগেই মন দিয়ে দিলে হয়নাভালবাসতে হলেও অতীত, বর্তমান ও ভবিষ্যত ভাবতে হয়এই প্রথিবীতে যেমন খারাপ মানুষ আছে তেমন ভাল মানুসও আছেভালবাসা কখনও রংও শারীরিক গঠন দেখে হয় নাভালবাসা হল দুটি অন্তরের মিলনভালবাসা হল সাথীর পাশে সারা জীবন থাকাভালবাসার শুরুটা করা যায় সহজে কিন্তু তা নিভানো খুবই কঠিনভালবেসে কেওকে দু:খ দিও নামন থেকে ভালবাসতে না পারলে ভালবাস আর না হলে দরকার নেইভালবাসা সবার দ্বারা সম্ভবনা

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